Hmm... I don't know if I'll be able to help you on this... I'm not good with prosetry at all and have only recently been exposed to it.

I think that it's arranged in a more poetic fashion, but written with an air of being prose. I don't know if that will help or not, but that's how I'm seeing it.

Like I said, I'm pretty new to all the prosetry stuff...

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Me too. I honestly haven't even read very much of it and I find it difficult to differ between the forms...or if it's even a formal form because there's no dA category for it [but that doesn't make it any less valid, of course]. I'm at sea.

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Stuck in the same boat, I guess. XP

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(Do illiterate people get the full effect of Alphabet soup?)
All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand.
^{Smile, and the world will smile with you. Laugh and they'll all think you're on drugs.}

Ah we'll find our shores.

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epiphanies are the spice of life.

I guess it depends on what you had in mind when you wrote it. If you thought this idea would be great as a poem, then it's prosetry, and if you thought that it would be better as a story, then it's prose.

That's my take on it....

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i would say that this piece could make for fantastic metaphorical fiction (which in turn sounds a lot like prose poetry to me). Somewhere between abstract and concrete, flowery and no-nonsense... It's gotta be what you make it. Unfortunately, that's the best advice I can offer.

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Just to clear things up (as if things will ever get clearer!) what I meant was that the specific poetic device you were using - parentheses for effect - seemed like it didn't fit, to me. I think poetic devices should still be used... I think.
That was what I was trying to say, but I still can't really answer the question... where is the line between prose and poetry?

At this point, prosetry seems to be writer-defined.
A cop-out answer, perhaps.

Then again, most things in life are like that, defined by those who experience or make them.

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epiphanies are the spice of life.