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    e   n   v   e   l   o   p   e
    n                           n          
    v                           v
    e
             me.           e
    l                           l
    o                           o
    p                   
f       p
    e   n   v   e   l   o   p   e

                        r        

  an
    e   n   v   e   l   o   p   e
    n
   cannot                  n          
    v
     contain               v
    e
         all the           e
    l
              things       l
    o
               i could     o
    p
                      say. p
    e   n   v   e   l   o   p   e


let me
    e   n   v   e   l   o   p   e
    n
         u        a        n        c        e        s
    verging   on       the      vicinity of
   sempiternal                 yearnings
    lit      with      the      lilt
    of         longing         lost in the
    patter   hidden   in   the  push of
    e   n   v   e   l   o   p   e   s


    i will paint the lines over
   till the story between them
                  dissolves.
                the shades blur
     so softly they'll slip upon
         you like an unformed dream curled in my heart's womb;
         when the sun sips night stars
i will shadow the whispers.
©2008-2009 =prairiedaisy
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i wrote my way out of one, i swear.

this has given me a lot of hell (you would not believe the amount of coding it needed to be bold in the right places.) suggestions are welcome as always.

for ~skerd22's August prompts; oblong

profuse thanks to :iconskerd22: for the much-appreciated help on formatting [at which i am quite terrible.]
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!!!

You straight-up rock.

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Freaking amazing.
Not really "advanced critique" but I'm at a loss for words.

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Wow! This is good.
Brain still dead.
marvelously done


xo!

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thank you. i'm glad you like it :hug:

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you're too kind. :hug:

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that's okay. we still love you. ;) thanks for the :love:

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glad you like. :heart:

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