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you hollowed out my bones
so softly (wielding a chisel of
words) that i might take wind
aboard wings, had you not

plucked me

from my sky with your
quicksilver grip
©2008-2010 ~prairiedaisy
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:iconwelcome2chaos101:
beautiful work....ur choice of words r.....i hav no words 2 describe it:no::wow:
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quicksilver grip

Love it.
"Chisel of words" is a great phrase, as well.

You've really got a way with poetry, haven't you?

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Band geek and proud of it! :heart:

(Do illiterate people get the full effect of Alphabet soup?)
All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand.
Smile, and the world will smile with you. Laugh and they'll all think you're on drugs.
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I hope so :) I just enjoy playing with words.

Thanks for all the :heart:! :)

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:idea: epiphanies are the spice of life.
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Thanks heaps! I'm glad you enjoyed reading.

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:idea: epiphanies are the spice of life.
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:hug:

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:idea: epiphanies are the spice of life.
:iconsherrabelle:
Chisel of words!
Wow!
:heart:'s this

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There are none as blind as those who do not want to see.
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any thoughts? yes, I LOVE YOU.
beautiful execution of irony. Lift up and smash down. (in the good sense though.) (... which sounds odd, but oh well...)

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I am a miner for Truth and Delusion

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