literature

don't let go

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Literature Text

you say
my words sing like the wind.

i say
you’re just hearing things;
i am no more the breath
of an angel

than you are the dappled
loam looming uncertainly
from the moss beneath trees,
but i can tell you this;

you are holding up my sky.
untamed spillage.

suggestions for improvement are welcome.





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ColonelFitz's avatar
The images in this piece are simply beautiful, and I thought that the last line was just perfect. :heart: