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i will let the hurt rasp
away on the edge

of my heart, for

i am tumbled so smooth
all the grating of want

leaves no stain
now that i want it dead, it refuses to die.

suggestions are welcome as always. :)







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i am tumbled so smooth
all the grating of want


you always have to read your poems so carefully so as to not miss all those hidden meanings
you're a very intricate and subtle writer